Sunday, July 06, 2008

Picard's Official Review (Part One)

I beam down to Starfleet Headquarters. This is the sort of meeting I dislike intensely. An assessment of how well I'm doing by some official who has never even left the planet.



So I'm having to wait in a Reception while some secretary, whose name is Jennifer according to the nameplate works on her electronic computer record.

"Admiral Bullock." will see you in a moment, Captain." the secretary says, "He is just finishing his lun....I mean his important document work."

After a while, a button goes off, which seems to wake Jennifer up from her intermittant make up and computer work.

"Admiral Bullock will see you now, Captain." she says somewhat apologetically, and point me to the door with his name on, as if he could he anywhere else!

"Come!" a voice beckons from within.



"Ah." he starts, "It's Picard of the Enterprise, isn't it? I thought it's time we had a little chat about how you've been doing."

"Yes, sir." I say somewhat demurely.

"I must say, we've had to repair your ship a few times, Captain." he starts, "I don't know what's holding it together now with the amount of repairwork it's had to have. Do you think you enjoy having it battered? Starfleet can't afford to keep patching it up."

"The Enterprise has fought a lot of battles." I say somewhat irritatingly, as if I want to throw a custard pie in his face, "If saving the Federation and the universe means matching the ship up a little, then so be it."

"Mmm." Bullock says to himself, then continues, "I must say, Captain, your crew leaves a lot to be desired. An android, a holographic doctor, a Borg drone, a rebel from an evil dimension two centuries ago, not to mention an Ensign who seems to be in so much trouble, she is mostly in the brig."

"All together, they are a fine group." I tell him defensively, "They may be unusual, but it's still the best ship and crew in Starfleet."

"Mmmm." Bullock again says to himself, and writes down some information on his page.

"Just what is this for, Admiral?" I ask, "Is it just a review or something more?"

"Well, Captain." he answers, "Every so often we have to do a review, as you say, but certain Admirals, and I won't say who, think you may have, shall I say, been in the saddle too long."

"You mean they want me to quit?" I ask.

"Oh, that's being too blunt." Bullock answers, "After all, you know what a generous pension allowance we at Starfleet have. You could relax on a farm with Doctor Crusher instead of worrying about the fate of the universe."

"How do you know anything about Doctor Beverly Crusher?" I say with annoyance, "That is not relevant."

"Well you can have whoever you like, Captain." Bullock answers as if he has been caught out, "I was only using the Doctor as an example."

"Mmmm." I say in similar way that he does, "What do you think of space travel I ask him."

"I've always been based at Starfleet Headquarters." Bullock answers, "I've never had the need to fly in a starship."

"Do you think you're qualified to ask me then."

"Careful, Captain." Bullock warns me, "I am an Admiral. I'll take my Report and see you with the findings in a couple of days."

To be continued...

16 comments:

Bob-kat said...

It seems that reviews or appraisals are the same no matter where or when you are!

Michele sent me over again to say I hope they don't retire the Captain.

Gordon said...

Jean-Luc - send Britney and her sistah to erm "entertain" the Admiral and well give him a free flight....

Merlyn Gabriel said...

oh oh...I hate these reviews!! They always scare the heck out of me.
Good luck Captain.

Amanda said...

WHAT?! They don't really use money but they STILL have appraisals?

The Mistress of the Dark said...

Oh dear, this can't be good.

Titania Starlight said...

I would have gave him a pie in the face. Brig or not!

The Curmudgeon said...

Of course, he could have been commandeered by some sort of alien lifeform and you'll have to blow his head off just to be sure -- I mean, it's happened before, right? And better to err on the side of caution, don't you think? Depending on the tenor of the review, of course. Just make sure you're fully armed when he releases his findings....

Jean-Luc Picard said...

Titania, your idea might be a good one.

Curmudgeon's idea of blowing his head off just in case he has been infected by an alien life form is a possibility. Who can prove he wasn't afterwards?

swirly girl said...

I love the snarl-face Admiral Bullock is making!

SQT said...

Some guy who's never been in space telling the Captain how to do his job.... The nerve!

Livingsword said...

Hello Captain!

I must say it is an honor to be able to visit your blog….

Well Jean-Luc…may I call you Jean-Luc?...

....We have all certainly been in meetings such as this but of course you have so much diplomatic experience that Admiral Bullock can hardly get the best of you, after all its not like he is commanding a Romulan War Bird he just has a shiny bureaucratic desk, I mean what warp can it attain!

zyriana said...

ARGH, how dare he tell the Captain to go settle on a farm or something... peeeeeeeshaw!

Humph... er umph.

Um, borg drone... and halographic doc huh?

What is holding the Enterprise together anyway I always wondered she takes such a beating. :)

GREAT first part Jean-Luc!

eastcoastlife said...

I dislike being assessed too. But I love the feeling of being a winner! :)

eastcoastlife - Singapore's Most Entertaining Blog!! Woot!

eastcoastlife said...

Send me some love... I love the Michelle sent me comments.

How about Capt Picard sent me... :P

Vargas said...

Ahh! Supervisor evaluations. Always a bore and rarely pleasant!

Michael Manning said...

Captain: Feel free to send me some of the women on board on over should you initiate cut-backs due to the economy! :D)!!!!